Saturday, July 25, 2009

My debut poem:: originally by me

Lying on the bed, i often wonder what went wrong,
Was it my mistake, or was it bad luck all along.

I tried so hard, but did i go a lil too far?
For, what else explains why things are so bizarre?

You ditched me, and you took away all my happiness,
You are happy, but you left me in the darkness.

Everything was going so fine,
Until that day, when you were no longer mine,

But lying on the bed, i cannot sleep,
For I have miles to go and so many promises to keep.

I cannot afford to falter again, I cannot afford to falter again,
For I have suffered too much, and now i must refrain.

Fight I must, win I should,
Only if I do all I could.

11 comments:

  1. Amazzzzinnggg bro.. ... . awesome... cooool one. understand the pain..

    Next up i wanna poem from u on how u have moved on :) but classic :)

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  2. This is amazing .. I am happy u wrote a poem and not made a Taj Mahal for the one whom u r missing !!

    But things doesnt go as planned .. So forget the past and live the present..

    hope to see more beatiful and full of improved poems from you!!

    Enjoy ..

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  3. Sahi hai guru,
    Keep them coming..
    I think picture abhi baki hai mere yaar [;)]

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  4. Not bad for a start:) Actually fantabulous Jatin!I never knew u were a poet as well.You are the best and deserve the best.Keep smiling always...All the best:)

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  5. not bad for a start..... by the way.... how did it come to your mind....i mean... is there someone who made you think on this theme.... must be a girl.i guess

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  6. behtarin yaar....
    par aise hi likhi hai ya iske peeche koi raaz chupa hai...????

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  7. hey dude... that's nice.. cheers

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  8. gud1 dear....
    simply like u...
    expecting some more poem but more cheerfull one...

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  9. thanks everyone for your valuable comments...

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  10. Hey nice poem.....Hope you get what you want

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  11. xcellent .... yaar tu all rounder hai ER .jatin ,CEO Jatin nd nw Our poet jats

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